Dark and delicious.
For a start, you should never hate piano work, even your own. It's one of the most versatile and beautiful instruments in the world, and you use it very well. :)
I really liked this piece, it is very moody and full of soul. I do think that you could have even made it into an intro to something bigger and darker. The layering is done very well and the echo on the drums works really well. You could have even called it 'Freddy Kruger dream sequence' :)
Keep up the beautiful work.